[ ] The Night Janitor’s Card - Page 8 of 11 - The Archivist

The Night Janitor’s Card

She took out a checkbook. It was old-fashioned, the kind with the big ledger stubs, and it had the bank’s name printed on the checks in the same typeface as the brass letters on the wall.

“Marj,” Dad said. “No.”

“Hush.”

“I’ve got the money. I’m not asking anybody for money. I just want my own money out of my own account.”

“I understand that, Al.” She was writing. “You’ll have your own money. Tyler’s going to walk over to that window and count it out for you himself, in twenties, and put it in an envelope, and he’s going to apologize while he does it.”

Tyler was already moving.

“But I’m writing this one too,” Marjorie said. “Because Lloyd said anything, and I’m ninety-four years old, and I’ve been waiting a long time to keep that promise, and you are not going to take it away from me by being proud.”

She tore the check out and held it toward him.

He didn’t take it.

“Al Dressler,” she said. “I will sit in this chair until closing.”

He took it.

I saw the amount. I’m not going to say what it was. It was more than four thousand dollars.

“That’s not for Mateo,” she said. “That’s for you. For whatever you want. A new truck. A trip somewhere. Or put it in the bank and let it sit, I don’t care. But you’re taking it, because my husband said anything, anytime, and he meant it, and I mean it, and that’s the end of the discussion.”

Dad folded the check once and put it in the back of his wallet. In the slot where the card had been.

Tyler came back from the window with a thick envelope. He held it out with both hands.

“Mr. Dressler,” he said. “I’m sorry. I didn’t understand what I was doing.”

“You were doing your job.”

“No sir. I was doing it badly. There’s a difference. My grandfather would’ve said so.”

Dad took the envelope.

“Your grandfather would’ve said a lot of things,” he said. “Most of them you’d have deserved. But he’d have shaken your hand after. So.”

He held out his hand. Tyler shook it. It wasn’t a trained handshake this time.

Marjorie stood up. It took a while. Dale came over with her elbow.

“Al,” she said. “You bring that boy out to the farm sometime. I’ve got a yard too, and I’ve got a lawn service that charges me ninety dollars to do what a seventeen-year-old could do for forty.”

“I’ll tell him.”

“And Al.”

“Yes, Marj.”

“The number’s still good. It’ll be good until I’m gone. I’m putting it in my will after that, so don’t you think you’re done with it.”

She walked out. The bell rang over the door. Dale helped her into the passenger seat of his Buick, and they pulled out of the lot at about twelve miles an hour.

The lobby was very quiet.

Then the teller who had started all of it, the young one, cleared his throat.

“Mr. Dressler,” he said. “I’m sorry too.”

“It’s all right, son.”

“My grandfather had a box here. In the seventies. He used to say the bank saved it in a flood. I always thought he meant, like, the building.”

Dad put on his coat.

“The building didn’t do much,” he said.

Categories: Stories
David Reynolds

Written by:David Reynolds All posts by the author

Specialty: Quiet Comebacks & Personal Justice David Reynolds focuses on stories where underestimated individuals regain control of their lives. His writing centers on measured decisions rather than dramatic outbursts — emphasizing preparation, patience, and the long game. His characters don’t shout; they act.

Leave a reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *