“You’re not here on vacation, Daniela. You’re staying for free, so you’ll be cooking, cleaning, and keeping this house spotless. Every day.”
My sister-in-law, Lauren, said it before I’d even made it all the way through the front door.
I still had my sunglasses on. I was still holding the handle of my suitcase. I had sand in my sandals from the three steps between the Uber and the porch.
I just stood there.
Behind me, my husband, Rodrigo, laughed. An easy, careless laugh.
“Don’t make that face, babe. It’s only two weeks. Think about how much money we’re saving.”
My name is Daniela Ortiz. I’m thirty-four years old. I’m a cost analyst for an auto parts supplier in Atlanta. I spend eight hours a day figuring out exactly what things cost. Labor. Materials. Time. Waste.
And for ten months, I’d been saving every spare dollar I could find for this trip.
I took extra shifts. I worked through two holiday weekends. I stopped ordering lunch and brought peanut butter sandwiches to the office. I said no to my sister’s birthday dinner in Buckhead because it was sixty dollars a plate. I put every bonus I earned into a separate account and didn’t touch it.
By May, I had a little under three thousand dollars.
The plan, the one Rodrigo sold me on back in January, was two weeks at a beachfront resort in Destin, Florida. White sand. A pool with a swim-up bar. Room service. Somebody else making the bed every morning.
I hadn’t had a real vacation in four years. Not since our honeymoon.
“You deserve this, babe,” Rodrigo had said, scrolling through the resort photos on his phone in our kitchen. “Two weeks of doing absolutely nothing. I’ll handle the booking. You just show up.”
So I let him handle the booking.
I didn’t check. I didn’t ask for a confirmation number. For once in my life, I let someone else do the planning.
That was my first mistake.
The flight landed in Fort Walton Beach at one in the afternoon. We got an Uber. I watched the high-rise resorts go by along the coast, one after another, their pools glittering in the sun. I kept waiting for the driver to turn into one of them.
He didn’t.
He drove right past the hotel strip and turned onto a narrow residential street. Then another. Then into a quiet neighborhood of pastel beach houses on stilts.
“Aren’t we going to the resort?” I asked.
Rodrigo didn’t even look embarrassed.
“Plan changed, babe. My brother got this house for the whole season. He’s letting us stay for free.”
Free.
That word started to rot in my mouth about twenty minutes later.
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