I Went to Close My Account—My Banker Locked the Door Instead

The Choice

When your banker pulls you aside, shuts the office door, and lowers her voice to a whisper, you already know whatever comes next won’t be something you can walk away from. What I discovered in that quiet office would force me to make an impossible decision—one that would either destroy my family or destroy me.


My name is Almeida Santos, and I’m twenty-three years old. In exactly four months, I was supposed to start medical school at Johns Hopkins—a dream I’d been building toward since I was eight years old and watched my grandmother die because she’d waited too long to see a doctor. She hadn’t trusted the system, hadn’t felt welcome in spaces that weren’t designed for people like us. I’d promised myself then that I would become the kind of doctor she needed but never had.

Everything I’d done since that day had been in service of that promise. Every honor roll certificate, every scholarship application, every grueling pre-med course, every volunteer shift at the free clinic. I’d worked three jobs through undergrad—tutoring, research assistance, weekend shifts at a nursing home—all while maintaining a 3.9 GPA. I’d saved every spare dollar, accepted every monetary gift with the solemnity of a sacred trust, and watched my education fund grow from hundreds to thousands to finally, miraculously, enough.

One hundred and eighty thousand dollars. Enough for the first two years of medical school if I lived modestly and kept working part-time. Enough to make my grandmother’s dream—my dream—real.

Until my parents took it all.

“To help your brother,” my father had said three weeks ago, his voice heavy with the particular shame that comes from admitting you’ve failed as a parent. “Max got in deep with some people. Bad people. They were threatening him, Almeida. What was I supposed to do? Let them hurt my son?”

My brother, Max. Twenty-eight years old and still living in our parents’ basement in our small Ohio town, still finding new ways to disappoint everyone who’d ever believed in him. Max, who’d dropped out of three different colleges, who’d gone through a dozen jobs in as many months, who’d started gambling online two years ago and hadn’t stopped even when the debts began piling up like snow in a blizzard.

Max, who my parents had always protected, always excused, always rescued.

And now me too, apparently. I was expected to sacrifice my future to save him from his choices.

“How much?” I’d asked my father that day, my voice sounding strange and distant to my own ears.

“All of it,” he’d admitted. “One hundred eighty thousand. But we’ll pay you back, mija. I promise. As soon as we can sell the rental property, as soon as—”

“That was my medical school fund,” I’d interrupted, each word precise and cold. “That was everything I’ve worked for. For fifteen years.”

“I know. But Max is your brother. Family takes care of family.”

Except Max had never taken care of anyone but himself. And family, apparently, only went one direction in our house—everyone sacrificing for Max while Max sacrificed nothing.

I’d left that conversation thinking the worst was behind me. That I’d defer medical school for a year, maybe two, rebuild my savings, and eventually still make it. The dream would just be delayed, not destroyed.

I’d been so naive.

That afternoon—exactly three weeks after learning my education fund had been emptied—I’d walked into First National Bank with one goal: close whatever remained of my accounts before anything else could be taken. My checking account still had about three thousand dollars from my last research assistant paycheck. My savings account had another fifteen hundred. It wasn’t much, but it was mine, and I needed to protect it.

“Almeida!” Maria, one of the tellers, called out as I walked through the door. She’d worked at First National since before I was born, had processed countless deposits from birthday cards and graduation gifts over the years. “I heard you got into Johns Hopkins! When do you start?”

The question hit like a fist to the sternum. Everyone in our small town knew about my acceptance. Local girl makes good. First in her family to pursue an advanced degree. The Mexican-American kid from the east side who was going to become a doctor.

Except now I wasn’t.

“Still figuring out the timing,” I said, forcing a smile that felt like glass in my mouth. “Is Mrs. Hullbrook available?”

“She’s at her desk. Go on back.”

Mrs. Hullbrook had been my banker since I was ten years old—the same kind-faced woman who’d helped me open my first savings account with forty-three dollars from my First Communion, who’d explained compound interest when I was twelve, who’d celebrated with me when my balance first hit five figures. She knew my story. She’d been part of it.

“Mrs. Hullbrook,” I said as I approached her desk near the back of the bank, trying to keep my voice steady. “I need to close my education account.”

Her hands, which had been typing something into her computer, froze mid-keystroke. She looked up at me, and something flickered across her face—something I couldn’t quite read.

“Of course, dear,” she said carefully. “Let me just pull it up.”

She turned back to her screen. Clicked. Scrolled. Paused. Frowned.

The silence stretched too long.

Then she stood abruptly. “Actually… can you step into my office for a moment?”

It wasn’t a question, despite the phrasing.

I followed her into the small glass-walled office she occupied at the bank’s rear corner. The door clicked shut behind us with a finality that made my pulse quicken.

Her office looked exactly the same as it always had—family photos on the bookshelf, awards for customer service on the wall, inspirational quotes about hard work and integrity framed beside her degree. But the way she was watching me now wasn’t familiar. It was the look people get when they know something is about to shatter and they’re trying to figure out how to hold the pieces.

“Your father made several withdrawals from your education account,” she began gently, sitting down and gesturing for me to do the same. “You knew about that part.”

“He told me,” I said, sinking into the chair across from her desk. My legs felt weak. “He said he took one hundred eighty thousand dollars to cover Max’s gambling debts. To pay off the people he owed before they hurt him.”

Mrs. Hullbrook inhaled slowly, deeply, like someone preparing to deliver news about a terminal diagnosis. Then she turned her monitor toward me so I could see the screen.

Numbers filled the display. Not one withdrawal. Not two. Multiple transactions. Repeated. Increasing. A cascade of money flowing out of my account like blood from an open wound.

“Your education account has had withdrawals totaling two hundred seventeen thousand dollars over the last six months,” she said softly.

The room tilted.

“That’s… that’s more than what was in it,” I managed. “There was only one-eighty.”

“There was more than one-eighty in it,” she corrected quietly. “You had more accumulated interest than you realized. Several scholarship organizations deposited funds directly. Your late grandmother’s trust made its final contribution last fall—twenty-five thousand dollars you probably didn’t know about because the trust administrator sent the notification to your parents’ address, and they…”

She trailed off, but I understood. They’d intercepted it. Hidden it from me. Used it.

My vision blurred. Two hundred seventeen thousand dollars. Not just my past sacrifices—my future too. Opportunities I didn’t even know I’d had, stolen before I could claim them.

“And there’s something else,” Mrs. Hullbrook said, her voice dropping even lower.

She slid a printed form across the desk. It was a withdrawal authorization form. My name—my full legal name, Almeida Rosa Santos—was written neatly at the bottom in cursive script.

Except it wasn’t my handwriting.

It looked like my handwriting—someone had clearly studied my signature—but the loops were slightly different. The pressure too uniform. The ‘A’ in Almeida formed in a way I never formed it.

“I never signed this,” I whispered, touching the paper like it might burn me. “I wasn’t even in Ohio that week. I was at a medical conference in Wisconsin. There are hundreds of witnesses, hotel records, flight confirmations—”

She nodded. “I know. We checked. The dates don’t match.”

The words hung in the air between us, heavy with implication.

My father hadn’t just stolen my money. He had forged my signature. He had committed fraud. Used my identity. Turned me into a criminal without my knowledge or consent.

“We have a problem, Almeida,” Mrs. Hullbrook said, her banker’s professionalism cracking to reveal genuine concern beneath. “Several problems, actually. And I need you to understand how serious this is.”

She turned back to her computer and opened a different file. “This is from our security system. Footage from the transactions in question.”

The screen flickered to life with grainy security camera footage. Date stamp: four months ago. Time: 2:47 PM on a Tuesday when I’d been in organic chemistry lab three states away.

My father stood at the counter, looking older and more haggard than I remembered. My brother Max stood beside him, shifting his weight from foot to foot in that nervous way he’d had since childhood. And behind them, partially out of frame, stood a stranger.

Tall. Mid-forties, maybe. Expensively dressed in a way that didn’t match our town—designer suit, Italian shoes, the kind of watch that cost more than my parents’ mortgage. He stood with the easy confidence of someone who owned every room he entered.

“Who is that?” I asked, leaning closer to the screen.

Mrs. Hullbrook’s face tightened into lines I’d never seen before—fear mixed with disgust. “Someone that federal regulators have flagged multiple times. He’s connected to… very serious financial activity. Money laundering. Organized crime. Interstate fraud operations.”

My blood went cold.

In the footage, the well-dressed man leaned in close to my father, speaking too quietly for the cameras to pick up. My father nodded repeatedly, his hands shaking as he signed papers. Max kept glancing nervously toward the doors like he expected someone to burst through at any moment.

“This wasn’t just about gambling debts,” Mrs. Hullbrook said quietly. “Or if it started that way, it became something much worse very quickly.”

She pulled up another document—transaction records showing the withdrawn money moving through a complex series of accounts. My money, laundered through shell corporations with names like “Prestige Capital Holdings” and “Summit Financial Services LLC.”

“Your education fund wasn’t just drained,” she continued. “It was used as part of a money laundering scheme. The people your brother got involved with—they didn’t just want the debt paid. They wanted clean money. Legitimate-looking transactions from legitimate-looking accounts. And your education fund, with its long history and regular deposits from verified sources, was perfect for their purposes.”

I couldn’t breathe. The office felt too small, the walls pressing in.

“How… how is that even possible?” I stammered. “The bank should have flagged this. There are regulations—”

“There are regulations,” she agreed. “Which is why I’m sitting here with you right now instead of federal agents doing this interview.” She paused. “I’ve been delaying the mandatory reporting requirements while I tried to figure out how to handle this. But I can’t delay any longer. By law, I have to file a Suspicious Activity Report. Today.”

She pushed a business card across the desk—cream-colored, expensive cardstock, embossed lettering. “Harrison & Price, Attorneys at Law. Specializing in Financial Crimes Defense.”

“Your education fund wasn’t just drained,” she repeated softly. “It was used in a way that will trigger a federal investigation. The FBI’s Financial Crimes Division will be involved. The IRS. Possibly Homeland Security if the money crossed state lines in certain ways.”

My hands were shaking. I gripped the edge of her desk to steady them.

“I don’t… I don’t understand what you’re telling me. What am I supposed to do?”

Mrs. Hullbrook folded her hands on her desk—the same hands that had helped me count coins when I was ten, that had processed my first scholarship check, that had celebrated every milestone in my financial journey toward medical school.

“You deserve to know the truth,” she said. “I’ve known you since you were a little girl, Almeida. I’ve watched you work harder than any kid I’ve ever seen. You don’t deserve what’s been done to you.” She paused. “But now you have a choice to make.”

My throat was so tight I could barely speak. “What choice?”

She met my eyes with an expression that was equal parts sympathy and steel.

“Whether you go down with them,” she said quietly, “or help bring them down.”

The words settled over me like ash.

“If you do nothing,” she continued, “you’re legally complicit. Your signature—forged or not—is on those documents. Your account facilitated those transactions. Even if you can prove you didn’t know, even if you can prove you were out of state, the federal investigation will destroy your life. No medical school. No professional licenses. Years of legal battles, crushing debt from attorney fees, your name permanently associated with money laundering and organized crime.”

She let that sink in before continuing.

“But if you cooperate with the investigation—if you provide evidence, testify to what you know, help prosecutors build their case—you have a chance. Not a guarantee, but a chance. Victim status instead of co-conspirator status. Immunity in exchange for cooperation.”

“You’re asking me to testify against my father,” I said, each word feeling like I was pulling glass from my throat. “Against my brother.”

“I’m asking you to tell the truth about what was done to you,” she corrected gently. “About crimes committed using your identity. About money stolen from your future to finance something you never consented to be part of.”

Tears burned my eyes. “They’re my family.”

“I know, sweetheart. I know.” Mrs. Hullbrook’s voice cracked slightly. “But they put you in this position. Not me. Not the bank. Not the federal government. They made choices that turned you into collateral damage.”

I thought about my father—the man who’d taught me to ride a bike, who’d worked double shifts at the plant to keep food on our table, who’d cried at my high school graduation. The same man who’d stolen my future to save his golden child.

I thought about Max—my big brother who’d let me tag along when we were kids, who’d protected me from bullies in middle school, who’d been my hero once. The same brother who’d gambled away not just his own future but mine, and apparently hadn’t cared enough to stop.

I thought about my mother, who must have known. Who must have signed off on this. Who’d looked me in the eye three weeks ago and said nothing about the additional thirty-seven thousand dollars, nothing about the forgery, nothing about the criminal enterprise my education fund had been conscripted into.

And I thought about my grandmother, whose final gift to me—twenty-five thousand dollars from her life insurance policy, saved and scraped together through decades of cleaning houses—had been stolen and laundered through criminal accounts without her name or her memory even being acknowledged.

“What happens if I cooperate?” I asked, my voice barely above a whisper.

Mrs. Hullbrook pulled out a folder she’d clearly prepared in advance. “First, you contact this attorney today. Immediately. Before you talk to your parents, before you talk to anyone. He’ll guide you through the process of providing evidence to federal investigators while protecting your rights.”

She pulled out another document. “Second, you file a fraud report—documenting every forged signature, every unauthorized transaction, every instance of identity theft. This establishes you as a victim, not a participant.”

Another document. “Third, you cooperate fully with the investigation. That means sharing everything you know—every conversation with your parents about Max’s debts, every detail about his gambling, every interaction you had with anyone involved. You become a witness for the prosecution.”

“And then what?” I asked. “My family goes to prison and I… what? Go to medical school while my father’s in a cell?”

“Your father made choices,” Mrs. Hullbrook said firmly. “He chose to steal from you. He chose to forge your signature. He chose to involve your money in criminal activity. Those were his choices, Almeida. Not yours. You don’t owe him your future as payment for his mistakes.”

She leaned forward. “But I need you to understand something else. If you don’t cooperate, if you try to protect them, you won’t be protecting them at all. The investigation is happening regardless. Your silence won’t stop it. It will only ensure that you go down with them. Three lives destroyed instead of potentially one or two.”

I stared at the business card in my hand. Harrison & Price. Attorneys at Law.

“How long do I have to decide?”

“Hours,” she said. “Maybe less. I’m required to file the SAR today. Once I do, federal agents will start making contact. You want to be ahead of that, not behind it. You want to walk into their office with an attorney and a cooperation agreement, not be surprised by a knock on your door with handcuffs.”

My phone buzzed. A text from my mother: “Dinner at 6? Your father wants to talk.”

I showed Mrs. Hullbrook the screen.

She nodded grimly. “They know something’s wrong. Maybe they’ve been contacted already. Maybe they’re just nervous. Either way, you need to be very, very careful about what you say to them until you’ve spoken with an attorney.”

I stood up on shaking legs. The room spun slightly.

“Almeida,” Mrs. Hullbrook said as I reached for the door. “I know this is impossible. I know you’re being asked to make a choice no one should have to make. But I also know who you are. I’ve watched you your whole life. You’re one of the strongest people I’ve ever met.”

She stood and walked around her desk to face me directly.

“You became the person you are—the person who got into Johns Hopkins, who built that education fund through sheer determination, who promised your dying grandmother you’d become a doctor—because you tell the truth. Even when it’s hard. Especially when it’s hard. Don’t lose that now. Don’t let them turn you into someone who lies to protect people who stole from her.”

I left the bank in a daze, Mrs. Hullbrook’s business card clutched in my hand like a lifeline. The afternoon sun felt too bright. The familiar streets of my hometown looked strange, unfamiliar, like a movie set that had been revealed as false.

I sat in my car in the bank parking lot and stared at my phone. At my mother’s text. At the business card. At the choice that wasn’t really a choice at all.

Then I dialed the attorney’s number.

A receptionist answered on the second ring. “Harrison & Price, how may I direct your call?”

“My name is Almeida Santos,” I said, my voice steadier than I expected. “I need to speak with someone about a federal financial crimes case. It’s urgent.”

“One moment please.”

Hold music. The tick of my car’s clock. My heart hammering against my ribs.

Then a man’s voice, professional but not unkind: “This is Daniel Harrison. How can I help you, Ms. Santos?”

I told him everything. The stolen education fund. The forged signatures. The security footage. The criminal organization. The choice I’d been given—go down with my family or help bring them to justice.

He listened without interrupting. When I finished, there was a long pause.

“Ms. Santos,” he finally said, “I’m very sorry for what’s been done to you. And I can help, but I need to be clear about what helping means. This won’t be easy. It will be one of the hardest things you’ve ever done. Are you prepared for that?”

I thought about my grandmother’s face as she lay dying, whispering for me to be strong, to be brave, to become the doctor she’d needed but never had.

I thought about the promise I’d made—not to my parents, not to Max, but to myself and to her memory.

“Yes,” I said. “I’m prepared.”

“Good. Don’t go to that dinner. Don’t talk to your parents or your brother until we’ve met and prepared your statement. Can you come to my office in Columbus tomorrow morning?”

“I’ll be there.”

“And Ms. Santos? You’re doing the right thing. I know it doesn’t feel like it right now. But you are.”

I hung up and sat in the car, watching the sun sink lower over the town I’d grown up in, the town where everyone knew my family, where my father was respected and my mother was loved and Max was pitied but protected.

The town I would probably have to leave once this all came out.

I texted my mother back: “Can’t make dinner. Something came up. I’ll call you soon.”

Then I drove to my apartment—the tiny studio I rented near campus—and began gathering documents. Every bank statement I’d ever received. Every deposit slip. Every scholarship letter. Every piece of evidence that proved whose money had been stolen, whose future had been sacrificed, whose signature had been forged.

By midnight, I had three boxes full of documentation. My entire financial life, laid out in paper trails and electronic records.

And in the morning, I would hand it all over to an attorney who would help me destroy my family in order to save myself.

The guilt was crushing. The sense of betrayal—even though I was the one who’d been betrayed—felt like acid in my veins.

But underneath the guilt and the grief, there was something else. Something harder and colder and more certain.

Anger.

Not hot, explosive anger. The quiet, determined anger of someone who’s finally realized they’ve been used. That their sacrifices have been taken for granted. That their dreams have been considered acceptable collateral damage in someone else’s dysfunction.

My father had taught me that family comes first. That you protect your own. That loyalty matters more than almost anything.

What he’d failed to teach me—what I’d had to learn in a banker’s office with security footage playing on a screen—was that loyalty has to run both ways. That family means protecting each other, not sacrificing one child to enable another’s destruction. That love isn’t measured in how much you’re willing to lose for someone, but in whether they’re willing to let you lose it.

My family had been willing to let me lose everything. They’d been willing to forge my name, steal my future, and walk away as if my dreams mattered less than Max’s debts.

So yes, I was angry. And yes, I felt guilty about what I was about to do.

But more than anything, I felt clear.

Clear about who I was. Clear about what I’d worked for. Clear about the difference between loyalty and self-destruction.

My grandmother hadn’t saved that money so it could be laundered through criminal accounts. She’d saved it so I could become a doctor. So I could help people like her—people who fell through the cracks, who didn’t trust the system, who died because no one fought for them.

If I let my family’s choices destroy my future, I wouldn’t just be failing myself. I’d be failing her. I’d be failing every future patient I might have helped, every life I might have saved.

That night, I barely slept. I lay in my narrow bed in my tiny apartment and stared at the ceiling, rehearsing what I would say to the attorney, imagining the conversations I would have to have, the testimonies I would have to give.

Imagining my father’s face when he realized I’d chosen my own future over his secrets.

At dawn, I got up, dressed in the most professional outfit I owned—the suit I’d bought for medical school interviews—and drove to Columbus.

Daniel Harrison’s office was in a sleek downtown building, all glass and steel and expensive furnishings. He was younger than I’d expected—maybe forty—with kind eyes and a firm handshake.

“Ms. Santos,” he said, gesturing to a chair across from his large desk. “Thank you for coming. I know this isn’t easy.”

“Nothing about this is easy,” I said.

“No,” he agreed. “It’s not. But easy isn’t always right, and right isn’t always easy. Let’s talk about what happens next.”

What happened next took six months.

Six months of depositions and interviews and federal agents asking the same questions seventeen different ways. Six months of my family’s increasingly frantic phone calls, which my attorney advised me not to answer. Six months of my small town learning that the Santos family wasn’t what everyone thought—that the respected factory worker and his wife had stolen from their own daughter, that the troubled youngest son had gotten involved with organized crime, that the golden child headed for medical school had turned on her family.

The local paper ran the story with a headline that made me sick: “Future Doctor Testifies Against Father in Federal Fraud Case.”

They made it sound like I was the villain. Like I’d betrayed innocent people instead of exposing criminals who’d stolen my future.

I lost friends. People I’d known since elementary school stopped returning my calls. My mother’s sisters—my aunts who’d celebrated every one of my achievements—sent me messages calling me ungrateful, selfish, a traitor to my blood.

But I also gained something. The federal investigation uncovered details even I hadn’t known. Max hadn’t just gambled away money—he’d been actively recruiting others into the scheme, bringing in more victims whose accounts could be used for laundering. My father hadn’t just stolen from me—he’d stolen from my late grandmother’s estate, from scholarship funds meant for other students, from anywhere he could access through his job at the credit union.

They weren’t victims who’d made one mistake. They were criminals who’d been operating for years, and I’d simply been the most convenient target.

The trial lasted three weeks. I testified for two full days, walking the jury through bank records and forged signatures and security footage. My father wouldn’t look at me. My brother glared. My mother cried quietly in the gallery.

And when it was over, when the guilty verdicts came back and the sentences were handed down—five years for my father, seven for my brother, suspended sentence for my mother in exchange for her testimony—I walked out of that courthouse and felt something I hadn’t felt in six months.

Free.

Not happy. Not vindicated. But free.

Free of the weight of other people’s choices. Free of the expectation that I should sacrifice my dreams to enable someone else’s dysfunction. Free of the guilt that had been placed on my shoulders for the crime of wanting something better.

The immunity deal held. No charges were filed against me. My record stayed clean. And with the attorney’s help, I filed a civil suit to recover the stolen funds—a suit that eventually resulted in a settlement from the insurance policies and seized assets.

I got back eighty-three thousand dollars. Not enough for medical school at Johns Hopkins. Not enough to reclaim everything that was taken.

But enough.

Enough to reapply. Enough to accept a deferred admission with a partial scholarship. Enough to start over.

That was two years ago.

Today, I’m in my second year of medical school. Not at Johns Hopkins—I chose a state school with a better financial aid package and a mission that felt more aligned with who I’d become through all of this. I work part-time at a free clinic serving immigrant communities. I’m specializing in family medicine. And I’m good at it.

I don’t talk to my father. He writes me letters from prison that I don’t open. My brother is out now, living in another state, and we haven’t spoken since the trial. My mother calls sometimes—awkward, painful conversations where neither of us knows what to say to the other.

Maybe someday we’ll find our way back to something resembling a relationship. Maybe we won’t.

But I’ve learned that sometimes the most loving thing you can do—for yourself and ultimately for others—is to refuse to be destroyed by their choices. To draw a line and say, “This far and no further. You can’t have my future. You can’t have my dreams. You can’t have my name on your crimes.”

They called me a traitor. Disloyal. A bad daughter who turned on her family.

But I call myself a survivor. Someone who chose truth over complicity. Someone who refused to let other people’s dysfunction become her destiny.

My grandmother would have understood. I think about her often—about the promise I made at her bedside, about the money she scraped together through decades of hard work, about her belief that I could become something more.

I’m becoming it. Not the way I planned. Not without scars.

But I’m becoming it.

And sometimes, late at night when the guilt tries to creep back in, when I wonder if I could have handled things differently, I remind myself of something Daniel Harrison told me that first day in his office:

“You can’t save someone by drowning with them. Sometimes the most courageous thing you can do is swim to shore and hope they eventually learn to swim too.”

My father is learning. Slowly. In prison, he’s getting addiction counseling for the gambling problem he’d been hiding for years. He’s starting to face what he did and why.

Max is in a program. Taking responsibility for the first time in his life.

My mother is rebuilding. Working. Attending therapy. Trying to understand how she enabled so much damage.

They’re learning to swim.

And I’m on shore, building the life they tried to steal, becoming the doctor I promised I would be.

Not despite them. Not because of them.

For myself. For my grandmother. For the little girl who made a promise at a deathbed and refused to let anyone—even the people she loved most—break it.

That’s what Mrs. Hullbrook meant when she said I had a choice. Not between loving my family and destroying them. Between destroying myself to protect them or saving myself by telling the truth.

I chose truth.

I chose survival.

I chose me.

And I would make the same choice again.

THE END

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Adrian Hawthorne

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Adrian Hawthorne is a celebrated author and dedicated archivist who finds inspiration in the hidden stories of the past. Educated at Oxford, he now works at the National Archives, where preserving history fuels his evocative writing. Balancing archival precision with creative storytelling, Adrian founded the Hawthorne Institute of Literary Arts to mentor emerging writers and honor the timeless art of narrative.

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