By four o’clock, the house was unrecognizable.
The floors gleamed. The windows sparkled. All three bathrooms were scrubbed top to bottom. Every towel in the house was washed, dried, and folded in neat stacks. The beds were made with fresh sheets. The kitchen counters were wiped and bare. The whole house smelled like lemons and sea salt.
Teresa came out on the deck wiping her hands.
“All done,” she said. “That was a two-week mess, honey. Not a one-week mess.”
“I believe you.”
She looked at me for a moment.
“You’re not staying here, are you.”
“No,” I said. “I’m not.”
She smiled. “Good for you.”
At four-thirty, the catering van arrived.
Two servers in black aprons set up a long dining table on the back patio. White linen tablecloth. Real china. Cloth napkins folded into fans. Little votive candles in glass holders. A centerpiece of white hydrangeas.
Then the food started coming out. The smell of grilled steak and garlic butter and fresh seafood drifted across the whole backyard.
The neighbors came out on their deck to look.
While the caterers set up, I finished my own reservation.
A five-star oceanfront resort about ten minutes down the coast had a last-minute cancellation. Fourteen nights. A suite with a king bed and a balcony looking straight out at the Gulf. Breakfast included. Full spa access. A private beach club with cabanas.
It took almost every dollar I’d saved.
My savings. My overtime. My ten months of peanut butter sandwiches.
I paid for it with my own card. I didn’t hesitate for a single second.
Then I called an Uber.
Before I walked out the door, I set three things on the kitchen counter. Neatly. Side by side.
First, Lauren’s handwritten chore list.
Second, the itemized receipts for the cleaning service and the catering. Paid with Rodrigo’s credit card.
Third, a note. Handwritten. On a piece of paper torn out of Lauren’s own spiral notebook.
Rodrigo,
You asked me to handle the cleaning and dinner using your card. Done. Your family has a spotless house and a catered dinner waiting for them.
My actual vacation starts today. My savings will not be buying your fishing rod. And they will not be paying for a trip where I’m treated like unpaid help.
I’ll see you back in Atlanta in two weeks.
Daniela
And at the bottom, one more line.
P.S. I saw the notifications on your tablet. I know there was never a hotel.
I picked up my suitcase and rolled it out the front door.
The catering coordinator was standing on the porch checking her watch. She looked surprised.
“Ma’am? Aren’t you staying for dinner?”
I smiled at her.
“No,” I said. “I have a reservation somewhere else tonight.”
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