I found her in the parking lot.
She was sitting on the back bumper of her rented white SUV, in the dark, with her shoes off. Her perfect hair was coming down. Her mascara was running. She was holding a cigarette she wasn’t smoking.
She looked up when she heard my heels on the gravel.
“Come to gloat?” she said.
“No.”
“You should. You won.” She laughed, but it was a terrible sound. “Congratulations, Laura. You got the girl.”
I stood there for a moment. Then I sat down on the bumper next to her. It was cold. I could feel it through my dress.
“It was never a contest, Crystal,” I said.
“Easy for you to say. You’re the one at the head table.”
We sat there for a while. Inside the barn, I could hear people cheering. They were cutting the cake.
“I didn’t mean to lie to her,” Crystal said finally. Her voice was small. “About the cards. I didn’t plan it. I swear I didn’t. She just pulled out that box, and she looked at me like I was… like I was somebody good. Nobody’s looked at me like that in a long time. And I couldn’t make myself tell her.”
“And the stories?” I asked. “About me keeping you away?”
She didn’t answer for a long time.
“I needed a reason,” she whispered. “For why I didn’t come back. And ‘I was scared and selfish and too ashamed to pick up the phone’ didn’t sound very good.”
She looked down at the cigarette in her hand.
“I was twenty-six,” she said. “I had a four-year-old, and a husband who worked all the time, and I felt like I was disappearing. Like there was nothing left of me. And then I met Rick, and he had a boat, and a house on the lake, and he made me feel like I was twenty again. And I thought, I’ll go for a few months. I’ll figure myself out. And then I’ll come back.”
She shook her head.
“And then it was a year. And then it was three years. And every year, it got harder. Every year, I thought, she’s not going to remember me. Or if she does, she’s going to hate me. So I just… didn’t.”
“She stood at the mailbox for hours, Crystal,” I said quietly. “On her seventh birthday. She stood there until it got dark.”
Crystal put her hand over her mouth. She started crying. Real crying this time. Not the pretty kind.
“I know,” she sobbed. “I know. I heard her tonight. I heard every word.”
I didn’t put my arm around her. I’m not that good a person. But I didn’t leave, either.
When she finally stopped crying, she wiped her face with the back of her hand.
“Why’d you do it?” she asked. “The cards. Why would you do that? For somebody else’s kid?”
I thought about it for a long time.
“Because she wasn’t somebody else’s kid,” I said. “Not after the first Saturday. She was mine. And I couldn’t stand to watch my kid stand at a mailbox.”
Crystal looked at me.
“Real mothers sit up front,” she said quietly. “That’s what I said to you this morning.”
“I remember.”
“I was wrong.”
“Yes,” I said. “You were.”
She laughed a little. A wet, broken laugh.
“Is it too late?” she asked. “For me? Is it too late to be… anything?”
I looked out at the dark fields. At the white lights of the barn twinkling through the windows. At my daughter’s silhouette, laughing as Owen smeared cake on her nose.
“I don’t know,” I said honestly. “That’s up to Hannah. Not me.”
“But if I tried?”
“Then you’d have to tell her the truth,” I said. “All of it. No more stories. No more roses. And you’d have to show up. Not for the dress fittings and the cake tastings. For the boring days. The hard days. The days nobody’s taking pictures.”
Crystal was quiet for a long time.
“That’s what you did,” she said. “Isn’t it? For twenty-one years.”
“That’s all being a mother is,” I said. “Showing up when nobody’s taking pictures.”
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